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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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But you made it wonderfully!
Good- I certainly couldn't draw that well. I particularly like the tail. The face isn't derp at all.
Problems- the front of the front red shoulder shrinks, it looks a little weird. The foot-passing is a little awkward, but I don't know how else you'd do it. the chest randomly jumps around.
Originality-3/5
Good-I haven't seen one of these before, though that may just be inexperience talking.
Problems- None that I know of, but I'm rating it around average just in case.
Technique-4/5
Good- The coloured legs make it easier to follow. the leg pairs all move seperately, it looks very natural. The anatomy is very win.
Problems- The tail animation is a little jaggedy, the forehead and neck lines flicker, and there are random blobs of colour. I'm not complaining, but it isn't really very polished.
Impact- 5/5
Good- It is just plain awesome.
Problems- None.
Average-4.5/5
I'm sorry for misattributing some of my points, the Deviantart Critique rating system isn't very clear.
Anyways, I really really like this.
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